shark4789's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Run from Mr. Krabs!]

Good

hopesforall responds:

Thanks man for reviewing!

[jelly jump work in progress]

I'm assuming this is your first game because I made something similar to this my first time (check my profile). This is a really great start; what I made wasn't as good as this. I will refrain from any real criticism because you are still learning and will continue to get better. Just keep working at it, art and programming are not easy. I haven't checked this site in 5 years and it's nice to see that people are still making content and learning flash.

EpicNarwhal responds:

thank you for the comment it is a work in progress will polish it up add more content and backgrounds.

[Black]

when you are creating a game in this genre it needs to have a meaning/story line. The game was too short to create an atmosphere and you may want to add more color. You as the creator are a very good artist and should definitely continue making games.

winterfingers responds:

Thanks, good point. This game did have a vague storyline (you arrive at house to realize you have been writing yourself letters) but obviously it's weak and not communicated well...
Thank for the feedback and encouragement, I'll make some better games!!

[Blue battlefield]

Awesome concept, there are some things that can make it better for instance add different levels and possibly health for the rings. It is also a little bit too big try making it a little bit smaller that way you can add more content. Great game otherwise keep making them you have some good ideas.

stdcout responds:

It's one of my first games, now i create another project - a platform game. It will be better than "Blue Battlefield".